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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2511175/1/

Wow. This is good shit. This is better than some novels (regardless of author or genre) ive read in the past few years...This is mtgat good. More people should know of this batman story, it is scary well thought out and well done and well written and all characters (as far as i can tell) are really really well written in character. *sigh* This is the kind of writing i have in my head, but cant put down on paper/screen. But damn i know when ive read it. I think maybe the only critique i have about this is that Hush is written a bit too over the top at the end for an underhanded mastermind, especially in such a gritty realisticly written fic, (he does monologue, just a bit) but, I can forgive that...Oh, and we dont see nearly enough of Montoya in the body of the fic (she opens and closes it and has a breif scene in the last third) but she could be in there more, but that is small potatoes compared to the flow and pacing and characterization in this thing.

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  • 30 Jun 2016, 15:38
    Hey! I hope you thrill at Colorado! WHen you know your physical or mailing address, could you pass it along? Thank you! We all think of you with love! Robert
  • 6 Mar 2013, 15:01
    Congratulations! This kid is going to have a great time!

    Keep posting.
  • 25 Feb 2013, 14:05
    I am so happy for you! What a wonderful thing to wake up to on a monday morning. Yes, I am a week late, but that is about right in bella-time.

    Congrats to you both - you know where i am if you…
  • 23 Feb 2013, 03:50
    Congratulations!
  • 19 Sep 2012, 22:47
    im just trying to get caught up on LJ a little now, so i just saw this and i'm so sorry hon. :( beautiful pictures though. a beautiful girl. i'm so glad she was lucky to have a happy long life with…
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